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Just for the coloration, at least, the name fits. *grin* And - that's a sweet gradient you've got there. Verrah pretteh!
The red "burn-thrus" and the dark blue stripes are quite interesting too - help keep it from being bland, but still allow the pale green to catch the eye and rest... -- Apophysis! UltraFractal! Yes - I FRACTAL!! Rhymes! Yes - I commit Poesy!! Very beautiful work: I love how You compose different forms in very harmonic art.
-- "The more you see, the more you want The more you taste, it just gets better." HV Me as pin-up lover - ~silwena or photographer - ~SilenBlues never seen parsley this pretty! I really love the misty background and the shining spots, they create a beautiful and delicate athmosphere
-- -sisters- =Rhiannon104 , =Colliemom -Admin- in *FractalDreams |
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May 10
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Overall the work has a biomechanical feeling about it, of something living and moving and pulsing but nontheless connected to something artificial. A feeling strenghten by the different sources of light which seem to illuminate the scene; different not only because they seem to originate from various spots, but especially because they are distinct in kind.
I am aware I'm describing this piece like a photograph, and that is what it seems to an extension: a photograph taken at the microscope of some android's neural connections.
That said, I think the upper portion could be better still. In my opinion it has the feeling of something that should look like a see-through part, but doesn't quite achieve it. It has a slightly "flat" appearance, that makes it seem like there isn't anything to look through to begin with. And, more important still, it seems to me that there isn't anything past that portion, as if space would end there. Maybe a slight texture, much more soft still of the one used in the bottom half of the fractal and mantaining that cream shade of the upper part, could remove the problem.
Anyway, that's not a serious issue, and it mostly derives from my personal way to see and interpret this piece. A beautiful work indeed!
P.S.: maybe it's because it's lunch hour here, but I can definitely feel the smell of parsley.
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